Okay so I was writing my story for writing club and I want to see what you guys think


Part 1


I was falling. The clouds damp as I fall through them.

"Link!" I hear some-one call my name. I try to see who it is, but I see no-one else falling, so who could it be?

"Link," I hear it again, as I near the tree-littered ground. I hear a roar in the background. The forest-floor benethe me is full of tourchs, and I can see a black quill cover....I-don't-know-what. I hear it roar again, and open its jaw. I seem to get sucked into its gaping maw.

"Link!" Zelda yells and I sit up, blinking the sleep out of my eyes

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